Eunoia revisited

I was impressed, and not particularly surprised to see phrases from EUNOIA pop up, since the first part of the “I” chapter has been reproduced more than others online. I also found it interesting that, in a later experiment, Chat-Gpt3 created what I think is a stronger text:

“Writing is a gritty business, riddled with limits. Critics spin, nitpick, insist, trimming vivid insights. It’s dim, this rigid grid, with insipid scripts sinking in thick criticism. I sit, grim, with ink, shifting in this strict prison. Brisk instincts flick, but critics insist, dimming bright ideas. In this stifling ring, inspiration shrinks, drifting in trivial bits. Writers, with gritty grit, risk it all, but critics rip, bite, and twist. Is it win? I find this pitiful; I dimly wish it’s different. Writing, within this slim grid, feels like a tiring, diminishing riddle. It’s grim, it’s rigid, but still, I write, despite critics’ limits, believing in vivid, brilliant insight.”

There are more subsidiary ruled I haven’t applied- internal rhyme, avoiding the repetition of words in the lexicon wherever possible. But it’s already fascinating.
and I’m having fun!

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